"Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required." Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that the public

health

can be improved by expanding the number of sports facilities.

Although

this

might have some impact on improving the

health

of people, some say that

this

would only be able to have minor changes on uplifting the condition of

health

in people.

This

essay will discuss both the views in the following paragraphs. On the one hand,

increasement

in

number

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a number

of sports facilities provides engagement of

more numper

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a number

number

more number

of pupils which in turn supports their physical and mental

health

.

Furthermore

, games

and

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And

physical activities provide refreshment and help ones' body to get

adequate amount

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an adequate amount

of exercise.

For instance

, according to the researchers playing games trigger our brain to release happy hormones and increase the strength of our body.

Consequently

, it contributes to the public

health

.

On the other hand

, the

hinderances

something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress

hindrances

created in the improvement of public

health

by the sports are busy schedules and lack of interest of the whole public in

such

activities.

In other words

, due to the busy daily routines people cannot give adequate time for the physical sports and games.

Moreover

, everybody

are not attracted

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is not attracted

to

such

physical recreation.

Finally

, it would have less effect on

imroving

getting higher or more vigorous

improving

health

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the health

of the public. In conclusion, Despite the fact that everybody are not attracted to the sports and games, these

activities

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Activities

will certainly help to them who are interested in

such

physical recreation. In my opinion, increasing the sports facilities will somewhat help the people who can spend their leisure time in recreation.