Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, university
education
has become a form of commercial business.
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is often thought by many that students who come from
low economic background
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a low economic background
and rural communities certainly face many challenges during their
enrollment
time in reputed Universities.
However
, I would completely agree with those who opine that tertiary
education
centres should
revive
look at again; examine again
review
the policies which avail
such
people get
admission
without having any trouble.
To begin
,
Firstly
, it is not surprising that many tertiary
education
centres reserved seats for students who come from more affluent family because they pay
huge amount
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a huge amount
of
money but
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money, but
rather than following
this
concept universities should allot seats for students come from impoverished family with higher grades.
In other words
, most of students from poor family and rural background face many issues while getting
admission
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
universities should deliberately reserve some seats for those who could not pay the fees.
For instance
, a recent survey conducted in Kuvempu University shows that seventy percent of Seats are allocated for rural students with good score.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
this
would be a great idea to make university
admission
easier for students.
Secondly
, universities should not demand from rural students to get higher academic scores from
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
third
previous class.
in
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In
other
words many
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words, many
tertiary
education
centres set demanded that students should have higher than 60 percentage
from
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of
their previous class.
for
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For
instance in
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instance, in
Mumbai, KVM universities allowed rural students
admission
for engineering
course who
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course, who
secured more than sixty percent in physical and
chemistry
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chemical
. So
this
is a
rediculous
inspiring scornful pity
ridiculous
policy they must drop out.
Thus students
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Thus, students
can get easier
admission
in
such
institutions. To conclude, undoubtedly, university
education
become
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becomes
more luxurious for countryside side people who come from
nonaffiliated
family.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree that universities should reverse places and they should not demand and consider
thier
of them or themselves
their
scores
this
might make
more easier
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easier
to get enrolled in tertiary
education
centres.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Equal opportunity
  • Diversity
  • Underrepresented groups
  • Financial constraints
  • Scholarships
  • Quota systems
  • Preparatory courses
  • Outreach programs
  • Academic standards
  • Tokenism
  • Reverse discrimination
  • Impoverished
  • Rural areas
  • Enrollment policies
  • Non-profit organizations
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