Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, university
education
has become a form of commercial business.bit
is often thought by many that students who come from Suggestion
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low economic background
and rural communities certainly face many challenges during their Suggestion
a low economic background
enrollment
time in reputed Universities. However
, I would completely agree with those who opine that tertiary education
centres should revive
the policies which avail look at again; examine again
review
such
people get admission
without having any trouble.
To begin
, Firstly
, it is not surprising that many tertiary education
centres reserved seats for students who come from more affluent family because they pay huge amount
of Suggestion
a huge amount
money but
rather than following Accept comma addition
money, but
this
concept universities should allot seats for students come from impoverished family with higher grades. In other words
, most of students from poor family and rural background face many issues while getting admission
.so
universities should deliberately reserve some seats for those who could not pay the fees. to a very great extent or degree
So
For instance
, a recent survey conducted in Kuvempu University shows that seventy percent of Seats are allocated for rural students with good score.so
to a very great extent or degree
So
this
would be a great idea to make university admission
easier for students.
Secondly
, universities should not demand from rural students to get higher academic scores from thier
previous class. of them or themselves
their
there
third
in
other Suggestion
In
words many
tertiary Accept comma addition
words, many
education
centres set demanded that students should have higher than 60 percentage from
their previous class. Suggestion
of
for
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For
instance in
Mumbai, KVM universities allowed rural students Accept comma addition
instance, in
admission
for engineering course who
secured more than sixty percent in physical and Accept comma addition
course, who
chemistry
. So Suggestion
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this
is a rediculous
policy they must drop out. inspiring scornful pity
ridiculous
Thus students
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Thus, students
admission
in such
institutions.
To conclude, undoubtedly, university education
become
more luxurious for countryside side people who come from Suggestion
becomes
nonaffiliated
family.i
agree that universities should reverse places and they should not demand and consider refers to the speaker or writer
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scores of them or themselves
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