Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, university

education

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has become a form of commercial business.

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is often thought by many that students who come from

low economic background

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a low economic background

and rural communities certainly face many challenges during their

enrollment

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time in reputed Universities.

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, I would completely agree with those who opine that tertiary

education

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centres should

revive

look at again; examine again

review

the policies which avail

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people get

admission

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without having any trouble.

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,

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, it is not surprising that many tertiary

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centres reserved seats for students who come from more affluent family because they pay

huge amount

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a huge amount

of

money but

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money, but

rather than following

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concept universities should allot seats for students come from impoverished family with higher grades.

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, most of students from poor family and rural background face many issues while getting

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.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

universities should deliberately reserve some seats for those who could not pay the fees.

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, a recent survey conducted in Kuvempu University shows that seventy percent of Seats are allocated for rural students with good score.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

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would be a great idea to make university

admission

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easier for students.

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, universities should not demand from rural students to get higher academic scores from

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of them or themselves

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previous class.

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in

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In

other

words many

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words, many

tertiary

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centres set demanded that students should have higher than 60 percentage

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of

their previous class.

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for

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instance in

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instance, in

Mumbai, KVM universities allowed rural students

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for engineering

course who

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course, who

secured more than sixty percent in physical and

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chemical

. So

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is a

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inspiring scornful pity

ridiculous

policy they must drop out.

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Thus students

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Thus, students

can get easier

admission

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in

such

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institutions. To conclude, undoubtedly, university

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become

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becomes

more luxurious for countryside side people who come from

nonaffiliated

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family.

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agree that universities should reverse places and they should not demand and consider

thier

of them or themselves

their

scores

this

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might make

more easier

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easier

to get enrolled in tertiary

education

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centres.