Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People have differed regarding whether mobile phones should be banned in public place or not. Those who support the ban argue that by doing

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our public places become more safe and secure. Especially during the time of emergency, it would help both the police and medical personnels to locate the victim, when they call, as

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phone can be easily traced by the assistance of GPS.

Moreover

, currently, public telephone booths are on the verge of extinction.

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small piece of equipment is considered as multitasking device, which can do many jobs at a time.

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helps the people to carry a single device in the place of many gadgets. Opponents of the above arguments point out that

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mobile phones can be used to take pictures and videos, it might be considered as an intrusion of others privacy.

Similarly

, when using these in the places: hospitals, airports and diagnostic centres, sensitive instruments get malfunctioned. If in the case of emergency, there are many public booths are available for the common people that can be used.

Finally

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people get easily distracted from when others talking on the phones, which can lead to road accidents, lack of concentration in works, which means people’s life may be in a dangerous situation until cell phone are prohibited in the public places.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

216 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

TOPIC – Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?

Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?