Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:  Say why you would like to go on the trip  Suggest what you could do to help during the trip  Ask other questions about the trip

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Hello Rohan Sir, I am writing

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letter to ask you about the trip that you are planning for my son and other children to another country, and I would like to join the tour. I have heard from my son that the school has planned to take their students to Australia. I

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got to know that you are searching for parents who can accompany you

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the travel. In that regard, I would like to join

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outing because I have been in Australia for my business journey and I know many things about its locals. If you allow me to join the group,

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will be

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helpful to take care of one group of children and handling their belongings. I would like to ask you about the exact date of arrival and departure so that I can take leaves in my office

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. Please share accommodation and expenditure details for the trip. I am very excited about

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trip and hoping for a positive reply from you.

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sincerely,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
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in additional
moreover
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for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

173 words

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