Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of
the most debatable
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the most debated
issues in the
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decade has been the extent our
society
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accepts people with psychological
diabilities
the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disabilities
. Some people believe our
society
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address mental and physical illnesses equally. Others, including myself, feel that our
society
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does not accept
patients
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patients'
patient's
psychological illnesses the same. In
this
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essay, I will provide arguments and examples to support my view. One of the most
noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
difference
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differences
between people with psychological and physical disabilities, is the lack of state programs and laws aimed to protect patients with mental illnesses. There are many legislations for people with physical
disabilties helping
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disabilities, helping
disabilities helping
them to incorporate into our
society
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,
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as having a sign language translator for deaf people in government offices, or having an elevator to assist people who
can not
can not
cannot
climb stairs.
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, In many
countries
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country
business offices are obligated to have several
vacancies just
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vacancies, just
for people with physical disabilities. Unfortunately, there are no legislations helping people with mental disabilities
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as PTSD
ot
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or
bipolar
diorder
a physical condition in which there is a disturbance of normal functioning
disorder
.
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, most of these people don't find a job, which prevents them from having a functional life. Another argument in favour of my opinion is that children are
tought
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
thought
about physical disabilities,
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as dementia or multiple sclerosis, much more than psychological illnesses, like schizophrenia or depression.
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, children are more open minded to to come in contact with classmates who has physical
diabilities
the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disabilities
than mental illnesses. According to the New York Times, 40% of the children suffering from a physical disability reported to have two or more healthy friends,
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to 10% among children with psychological disabilities.
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demonstrates that our education system does help to incorporate people with mental problems equally. In conclusion, I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
petients
a person who requires medical care
patients
patient's
patents
with psychological illnesses are not being accepted
similarly
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to people with
phsyical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
disabilities, as can be seen from the lack of governmental support and education. We should do more in order to help people with disabilities,
ragardless
in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
regardless
of the
etiology
the cause of a disease
aetiology
.

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