Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of
the most debatable
issues in the Suggestion
the most debated
last
decade has been the extent our society
accepts people with psychological diabilities
. Some people believe our the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disabilities
society
address mental and physical illnesses equally. Others, including myself, feel that our society
does not accept patients
psychological illnesses the same. In Suggestion
patients'
patient's
this
essay, I will provide arguments and examples to support my view.
One of the most noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
difference
between people with psychological and physical disabilities, is the lack of state programs and laws aimed to protect patients with mental illnesses. There are many legislations for people with physical Suggestion
differences
disabilties helping
them to incorporate into our Accept comma addition
disabilities, helping
disabilities helping
society
, such
as having a sign language translator for deaf people in government offices, or having an elevator to assist people who can not
climb stairs. can not
cannot
Furthermore
, In many countries
business offices are obligated to have several Suggestion
country
vacancies just
for people with physical disabilities. Unfortunately, there are no legislations helping people with mental disabilities Accept comma addition
vacancies, just
such
as PTSD ot
bipolar introduces an alternative
or
diorder
. a physical condition in which there is a disturbance of normal functioning
disorder
As a result
, most of these people don't find a job, which prevents them from having a functional life.
Another argument in favour of my opinion is that children are tought
about physical disabilities, impart skills or knowledge to
taught
thought
such
as dementia or multiple sclerosis, much more than psychological illnesses, like schizophrenia or depression. As a result
, children are more open minded to to come in contact with classmates who has physical diabilities
than mental illnesses. According to the New York Times, 40% of the children suffering from a physical disability reported to have two or more healthy friends, the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disabilities
in contrast
to 10% among children with psychological disabilities. This
demonstrates that our education system does help to incorporate people with mental problems equally.
In conclusion, I beleive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
petients
with psychological illnesses are not being accepted a person who requires medical care
patients
patient's
patents
similarly
to people with phsyical
disabilities, as can be seen from the lack of governmental support and education. We should do more in order to help people with disabilities, involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
ragardless
of the in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
regardless
etiology
.the cause of a disease
aetiology
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