IELTS writing Task 2--Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city area as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted. Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.

Nowadays, a rate of the

majority

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major

main cities around the world increases dramatically because of the huge population.

This

has caused a significant reduction in the quality of life in urban areas.

For example

, the environment becomes over-populated, and many pollutions have occurred. The following will illustrate the factors of over-populated and how can it be solved.

First

of all, the opportunity of

employment

might be one of the factors. A study

shown

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has shown

showed

that organizations tend to set their company in a big

city

, which can easily earn money and build reputation.

Hence

, they would like to offer more job opportunities in cities more than in the country areas.

This

definitely causes many people

move

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to move

to the

city

. Another reason is the educational resource. Take me as a real example, I had studied in two different universities because my parents changed their working places. One is in the countryside, which is lack of teacher resource, I even did not need to attend most of the courses due to there was no teacher to teach that course. Once I moved to the capital of my country, I started to realize that why people desperately want to

move

to the

city

to acquire better educational resources. Good quality of teaching resources, professional examination system, those definitely trigger more and more citizens to

move

to the

city

.

Secondly

, the best and the most appropriate solution to solve over-populated issue is that the government should balance the

employment

and educational differentiation between urban and rural areas. By doing

this

, it might equal the chance of

employment

, people would like to stay and find an occupation in their hometown, which leads to reduce the over-populated and pollution in the

city

area.

Furthermore

, if the government would like to assign some good teachers to rural area and provide affluent salary,

this

would be another proper way to persuade citizens not to

move

to the

city

. To sum up, the factors of overpopulation in the

city

and how to solve them are always a popular issue to discuss. I would like to restate that the imbalance of

employment

opportunity and educational resources are the main factors of it.

However

,  I strongly believe that these two factors can be solved by the government well-arranged resource management between

city

and country.