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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The given compares and contrasts data on the
amount
 of forested
land
, measured in millions of
hectares
, across 6 different
countries
 between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
,
from
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 the period of 5 years, all
countries
 except for
Euroupe
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Europe
 and Asia experienced a decline in
amount
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 of
land
 covered by forest.
In addition
, Europe had the highest
amount
 of forested
land
,
while
 Oceania had the least among the 6 mentioned
countries
. As can be seen from the table, Europe ranked first in the
amount
 of forest-covered
land
 with 989
million
hectares
 recorded in 1990, it
then
 observed an increase to 1001
million
 in 2005. Asia witnessed a similar upward trend in the
amount
 of forested
land
, which rose by exactly 8
million
hectares
 from 1990 to 2005. The other four
countries
,
by contrast
, saw a decline in
amount
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 of forest area. South America was the
second
 largest forested country with 882
millions
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of
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hectares
 in 2005, which was 37
million
 less than that in 1990, followed by South America with 882
million
hectares
 in 2005. Africa had the fourth largest
amount
 of forested
land
 in 1990, which was replaced by North America in 2005. Oceania was the least forested country, which observed a small decrease in
amount
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the amount
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 of forested
land
 of 2
million
 during the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, land, hectares, countries, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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