The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.
The table shows the data of Manchester University
student
enrolment in the years 1937, 1967 and 2017 and compares the percentage female
and male Change preposition
of female
student
, outside Manchester region Fix the agreement mistake
students
student
and overseas Fix the agreement mistake
students
student
.
Amount of Fix the agreement mistake
students
student
that enrolled over a period increased significantly, Fix the agreement mistake
students
three fold
between 1937 and 1967, and Correct your spelling
threefold
five fold
between 1967 and 2017. The percentage of female and male Correct your spelling
fivefold
student
over period
Correct article usage
the period
30
years were dominated by male, 55% in 1937 and 65% in 1967, Change preposition
of 30
while
in 2017, percentage
changed dramatically, which is dominated by female around 55%.
The Correct article usage
the percentage
student
came
from Manchester became decreasing significantly over a period Correct pronoun usage
who came
80
years, which is 55% Change preposition
of 80
then
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than
felt
to 1-2% in 2017. And it was strengthened with Correct your spelling
fell
upward
amount of Correct article usage
an upward
oversease
students Correct your spelling
overseas
with
various Change preposition
from
countries
. Just over 6% (4 countries
) in 1937, 7% (26 countries
) and 32% (102 countries
).Submitted by namirahtea on
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