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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.
The table shows the data of
Manchester
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 University
student
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 enrolment in the years 1937, 1967 and 2017 and compares the percentage
female
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of female
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 and male
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student
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students
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, outside
Manchester
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 region
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student
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students
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 and overseas
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student
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students
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. Amount of
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student
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students
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 that enrolled over a period increased significantly,
three fold
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threefold
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 between 1937 and 1967, and
five fold
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fivefold
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 between 1967 and 2017. The percentage of female and male
student
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 over
period
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the period
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30
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of 30
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 years were dominated by male, 55% in 1937 and 65% in 1967,
while
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 in 2017,
percentage
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the percentage
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 changed dramatically, which is dominated by female around 55%. The
student
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came
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who came
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 from
Manchester
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 became decreasing significantly over a period
80
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of 80
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 years, which is 55%
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then
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than
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felt
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fell
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 to 1-2% in 2017. And it was strengthened with
upward
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an upward
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 amount of
oversease
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overseas
 students
with
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from
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 various
countries
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. Just over 6% (4
countries
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) in 1937, 7% (26
countries
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) and 32% (102
countries
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). It shows that
Manchester
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 university become
international
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an international
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 university that belonging the world.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words manchester, student, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • student enrolments
  • university
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • comparison
  • trend
  • change
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • remarkable
  • notable
  • surprising
  • conclusion
  • insights
  • summary
  • overview
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