In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150

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enjoying life

enjoying of life

life

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derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in

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life

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, it may just be an only advantage for raising human

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,

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: If I want to live as more as possible, I can watch raising my family like my son or

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a female human offspring

daughter

and my grandchild, or at least, I can spend time more and more for

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

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arousing or holding the attention

interesting

of

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a new place

the new place

in the world.

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, I mentioned about raising crowed in the

society

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be successful; achieve a goal

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on

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the older age

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society

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, I strongly believe that

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of great significance or value

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factor of raising human

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and

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a youth member

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state they need more medical

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required activity

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the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

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. To conclude, I mentioned 3 factors that I think those are

parts

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part

of advantage and disadvantage, I believe that it is not important raising human

life

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without having

nice

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a nice life

life

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