In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150

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Initially
, human
living not
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lives, not
lives not
only have many consequences for planet who living in
there but
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there, but
also
they have
badly
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bad
impact on each other. But all the human reaching have own
prons
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
and cons. So, let you know more about me and how
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think about
this
subject, I want to suggest 3 of my point of view.
First
, having more time for
enjoing of
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enjoying life
enjoying of life
life
.
Second
, raising crowd in the world and Thrid,
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dried grape
raisins
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ruined
older age in the
society
. Frist, I mentioned about having more time for
enjoing
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
enjoying
of
life
, it may just be an only advantage for raising human
life
,
for example
: If I want to live as more as possible, I can watch raising my family like my son or
doghter
a female human offspring
daughter
and my grandchild, or at least, I can spend time more and more for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
and
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
of
new place
Suggestion
a new place
the new place
in the world.
Second
, I mentioned about raising crowed in the
society
, it will make a hard situation and
this
matter need to
manaige
be successful; achieve a goal
manage
mange
carfuly
taking care or paying attention
carefully
,
for example
: You can
emagane
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
in your
maind
that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
mind
minds
for shopping of market
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
and long and long queue of
peaple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
stay
at
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on
the line or traffic jam that making by increasing cars in the
steerts
a thoroughfare (usually including sidewalks) that is lined with buildings
streets
. Thrid, I mentioned about raising
older age
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the older age
in
society
, I strongly believe that
this
is an
importand
of great significance or value
important
factor of raising human
life
and
this
is an important disadvantage,
for example
: Human in the adult age has not both ability and power of body like
youth member
Suggestion
a youth member
of
society
, in
this
state they need more medical
requairment
required activity
requirement
requirements
than the past,
this
matter has
a
Suggestion
an
expence
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
on
society
. To conclude, I mentioned 3 factors that I think those are
parts
Suggestion
part
of advantage and disadvantage, I believe that it is not important raising human
life
without having
nice
Suggestion
a nice life
life
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • longevity
  • life expectancy
  • scientific advancements
  • experience
  • personal goals
  • loved ones
  • knowledge
  • wisdom
  • contributions
  • advancements
  • fear of death
  • appreciation for life
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