The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates
amount
thousands
of Britain
student
in
further
education that based on gender and
kinds
Suggestion
the kinds
of
fulltime
for the entire time appropriate to an activity
full-time
full time
or
part
-
time
studying between in 1970 and 1990. The
amount
of
part
time
student
significantly bigger than full
time
. The trend of female
student
increased either in full
time
or
part
time
education, so on full
time
male
student
, while
amount
of
part
time
student
fluctuatively
and
trend
have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
tend
to decrease from the
first
period
. The highest
amount
of
part
-
time
male
student
happened in a
period
1970/1971 around 1000
thousands
Suggestion
thousand
, while female
student
happened in a
period
1990/1991 around 1100
thousands
Suggestion
thousand
.
On the other hand
, the highest full-
time
student
reached above 200
thousands
Suggestion
thousand
in a
period
1990/1991 either in male or female. Around 150
thousands
part
time
male
student
downward in
second
Suggestion
the second period
period
and upward again in
third
Suggestion
the third period
period
. In Britain,
part
-
time
had
much
Suggestion
many
students than full
time
education and there was the
rise
Suggestion
rising
amount
of female
student
.

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