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Both poor and rich find the accessibility into university difficult.Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
People think that it has become difficult to get into university for rich people as well as poor people. I do not agree with the statement as in my opinion, wealthy people are more privileged to get admission in the universities as compared to needy ones. I will discuss in the
further
 paragraphs of the essay about it.
First
 of all, universities
has
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have
 a certain criteria for the admissions
such
 as entrance tests, no backlogs, special co-curricular activities etc.
and
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And
 those who are able to fulfil
the criterions get
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the criteria to get
the criteria get
entry
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an entry
.
For instance
, if a rich man' kid have not obtained
desired score
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a desired score
in
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on
 the entrance exam,
then
 he/she would not be able to be in the institute.
Furthermore
, money is an issue for the kids belonging to economically weak families as if their children would pass the test and they do not have money to pay the fees, they would not get the admission. Sometimes, institutes provide scholarships for the poor kids and they got admission, still there remain many hurdles in their way like hostel fees,
transport
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transportation
 expenses, etc.
which
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Which
 makes them to
drop their plans of
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drop their plans
further
 studies.
Second
 of all, money is the privilege for the children of families with higher incomes because of the seats of management quotas and by giving huge bribes to the staff, they are able to get into the higher education institutes. The final thing is
corruption
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the corruption
 which takes away the opportunities from the hands of underprivileged ones. In the end, I say that everyone has the right of getting equal opportunities in the education and government should support the economically weaker individuals to get it. Corruption should
also
 be prevented to stop these types of practices.
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