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Formal Exams are used to assess students at each of every semester in many countries. Why are these exams used by schools and universities. What other types of assessments are possible.

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At the
end
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 of every
semester
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, many countries use
formal
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a formal examination
examination
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 as assessment method for students. These formal exams are largely used by universities to check their students what they have been taught in
previous six months
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the previous six months
. The other possible types of assessments for
university
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 students could be the practical
examination
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, projects and assignments related to their subjects. It is mandatory for universities to
test
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 the academic level of their students by assessing them with formal examinations at the
end
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 of each
semester
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. Examining the students is important because universities need to know the progress of their students. Knowing the outcomes of students may help
university
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 to enhance the quality of teachings by the way of providing various types of training to their instructors and staff.
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, formal
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are widely used
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is widely used
 by the universities at the
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 of every
semesters
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semester
.
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 formal examinations are widely used in almost every
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 as assessment method,
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however there
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however, there
 are other types of
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, which could be used to examine the students. Possible
examination
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 ways are assignments, projects and practices, which might be
good way
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a good way
 to
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 the
student
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student's
 ability with
different approach
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different approaches
. My
university
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test
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 students throughout
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semester
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the semester
 by giving them multidisciplinary projects and assignments with extreme marking criteria’s. Henceforth, students’ ability to understand can be tested with different kind of approaches like projects and assignments throughout
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semester
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the semester
. In conclusion, Formal examinations are used by the universities to examine their students in
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end
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the end
 of every
semester
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.
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 method is used around the world universities to assess the ability of their students. In
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, projects and assignments maybe the other way to
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 the students learnt knowledge of
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the topic
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