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Some people think that watching sports is wastage during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought by some that by spending free
time
 in
watching particular
Suggestion
watching a particular
 sport is killing of precious
time
. In my opinion, I strongly believe that
leisure
time
 ought to be utilised for the personal growth and development.
Firstly
, free
time
 can be utilised in maintaining and improving
health
. At present, most of the
time
 an individual is involved in office with long working hours and shift jobs (which results in poor
health
). By getting involved in some sort of physical activity which is a key to good
health
.
Furthermore
, exercise during the
leisure
 will be beneficial for both mental and physical
health
.
Secondly
,
leisure
time
 can be planned in
such
 a way which enhances our soft skills. I consider
enrolling one
Suggestion
enrolling in one
 self into some classes which develops the traits
such
 as leadership
,
Accept space
,
 communication and
time
 management.
Moreover
, it is necessary to perform successfully and advance in most jobs.
Finally
, I believe that
time
 ought to be kept for recreation of mind and soul.
In other words
, indulging one’s self into
hobbies which
Accept comma addition
hobbies, which
 brings
lot
Suggestion
a lot
 of happiness and satisfaction and doing meditation which is considered as food for
soul
Suggestion
the soul
.
In addition
 to, it helps in relieving stress by involving in something one can enjoy, and
also
 increases self-esteem and confidence. To conclude, wasting
time
 by watching sports
in
Suggestion
at
leisure
time
 is not a wise thing to do.
Therefore
, doing physical activity, enhancement of soft skills and
pursuance
Suggestion
the pursuance
 of hobbies is the best thing one can do in
leisure
time
.
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