The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates various changes on an
island
after the building of some touristic facilities.
Before the renovation, the island
was surrounded by sea and small
beach without any construction Correct article usage
a small
and
Correct word choice
or
touristic
area. Yet after Replace the word
tourist
in
Change preposition
apply
this
island
, many sorts of the
place was constructed namely the pier, restaurant, several accommodations and reception services for visitors usage.
It is clearly seen that the only thing Correct article usage
apply
has
not been changed is trees after addition when be compared both two maps.Correct pronoun usage
that has
Moreover
, the residential area was built on both sides of the reception which is located in the middle of the island
. In addition
, the accommodation is connected to the beach and the other housing area via footpath while
the reception was linked by vehicle
tank.
Correct article usage
a vehicle
Overall
, the island
experienced significant development and also
it is noticed that many tourist facilities were built on the island
without cutting down trees during the renovation works.Submitted by oykum.toprak35 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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