The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates various changes on an

island

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after the building of some touristic facilities. Before the renovation, the

island

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was surrounded by sea and

small

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a small

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beach without any construction

and

Correct word choice

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touristic

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tourist

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area. Yet after

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apply

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this

Linking Words

island

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, many sorts of

the

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apply

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place was constructed namely the pier, restaurant, several accommodations and reception services for visitors usage. It is clearly seen that the only thing

has

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that has

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not been changed is trees after addition when be compared both two maps.

Moreover

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, the residential area was built on both sides of the reception which is located in the middle of the

island

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In addition

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, the accommodation is connected to the beach and the other housing area via footpath

while

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the reception was linked by

vehicle

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a vehicle

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tank.

Overall

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, the

island

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experienced significant development and

also

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it is noticed that many tourist facilities were built on the

island

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without cutting down trees during the renovation works.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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