The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates various changes on an
island
after the building of some touristic facilities. Before the renovation, the
island
was surrounded by sea and
small
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a small
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beach without any construction
and
Correct word choice
or
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touristic
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tourist
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area. Yet after
in
Change preposition
apply
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this
island
, many sorts of
the
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apply
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place was constructed namely the pier, restaurant, several accommodations and reception services for visitors usage. It is clearly seen that the only thing
has
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that has
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not been changed is trees after addition when be compared both two maps.
Moreover
, the residential area was built on both sides of the reception which is located in the middle of the
island
.
In addition
, the accommodation is connected to the beach and the other housing area via footpath
while
the reception was linked by
vehicle
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a vehicle
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tank.
Overall
, the
island
experienced significant development and
also
it is noticed that many tourist facilities were built on the
island
without cutting down trees during the renovation works.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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