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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

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In these modern times, with access
of
Suggestion
to
 television to everyone, children are exposed to an increasing magnitude of
violence
 which is morphing their innocent natures into something feral. I agree that todays children have become normalized to
violence
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of their
gullotinous
given to excess in consumption of especially food or drink
gluttonous
glutinous
gelatinous
 consumption of electronic media. The entertainment industry
also
 capitalizes on human nature for thrill and adventure by churning out adrenaline inducing
content
 for the masses
day
 after
day
. Our News industry is
also
 to blame that they would spread out news of
violence
, discontent and disaster as it garners more views compared to a milder topic. Most of
this
content
 is easily accessible to anyone and of any age, even if there are restrictions of age they are easy to bypass. The result of being exposed to
such
violence
 is that the infant mind conceptualizes and accepts
violence
 as part of daily life. The exponential rise in school shootings in America is an effect of
this
. Bullying is increasing
day
 by
day
. Cases of
agression
a disposition to behave aggressively
aggression
 and mental health are ever more
prevailent
most frequent or common
prevalent
.
This
 culture of
violence
 promotes more
violence
 as the children grow up to be adults producing violent
content
 for the
next
generation thereby
Accept comma addition
generation, thereby
 putting the entire society in a perpetual state of discontent.
Violence
 whether presented in
a
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an
 awe inspiring heroic tale or in a soul crushing incident is still
violence
, these nubile minds are to be educated on peaceful ways rather than being exposed to
such
content
. A system of check and balance on our media industry is required immediately to curb the negative impact it has on the children and society as
whole
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a whole
. If we continue as is the sociological and psychological issues among children will continue to grow.
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