Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product or service. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people say
price
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is the most significant factor to be considered while buying a
product
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or s
evice.
work done by one person or group that benefits another
service
device
Although
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price
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is certainly one aspect that one has to look after at the time of purchasing things, it certainly is not the most important. That's why, I contend
this
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assertion.
First
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of all,
p
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rice
Suggestion
the price
is not the prime factor over
q
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uality
Suggestion
the quality
of the products or services.
In other words
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,
quality
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is to be considered the most important factor as pricing do not determine the feature or traits of the materials that we purchase.
For instance
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, the vendors sell the same
quality
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product
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i
n
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at
a low
p
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rice rather than in
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price rather than
the supermarket.
Moreover
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,
quality
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determines the s
ustainabilty
the property of being sustainable
sustainability
of the products
.
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.
Consequently
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,
p
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rice
Suggestion
the price
is not the salient thing to consider while purchasing the materials
.
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.
Furthermore
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,
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,
when it comes to s
ervices
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the services
they must see the facilities
,
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,
the doctor which is going to help you
,
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,
the person who is suffering for s
eviour
intensely or extremely bad or unpleasant in degree or quality
severe
problem will be c
ure
Suggestion
cured
soon people should think about
this
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rather than seeing
price
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. If y
ou
of you or yourself
your
medical service is phenomenal than they should not see the
price
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. To show an example, if a person i
s suffer
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is suffering
has suffered
s
ay
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say, such
such
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as f
lue
an acute febrile highly contagious viral disease
flu
and he is taking m
edicines but
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medicines, but
he is not getting recover
,
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,
he will not go to s
ome
one or some or every or all without specification
any
professional doctor because he is saving
money
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.
However
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,
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,
but he i
s not seeing
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doesn't see
does not see
that in medicine which he i
s taking
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has been taking
has taken
since l
ong but
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long, but
not getting c
ure
Suggestion
cured
,
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,
he is wasting
money
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on medicine but
,
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,
instead
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of h
e
male possessive pronoun
his
him
could have c
onsult
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consulted
a professional doctor.
Last
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and foremost
,
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,
people should not see
money
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when they get proper service and a
product
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.
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.
It will be beneficial to them only in f
uture.
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the future
To e
xamplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
,
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,
if they go to some good doctors they will not get any problem for l
ong time.
Suggestion
a long time
In addition
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to
product
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if they buy products of good
quality
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they do not have to see for l
ong time
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a long time
like say for 10 - 12 years
for example
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if they by microwave. To draw a conclusion
,
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,
p
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rice
Suggestion
the price
is not important when you get proper facilities and services and if one have enough
money
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than they should not see
m
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oney.
Suggestion
the money
I
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In
my opinion
,
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,
would say if people get better t
hing
that time; that moment
then
they should prefer that thing most and do not see any other things to get cheap things you will get suffer you are getting things proper t
han
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
grab it.

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