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Guru
Kashi
 University
Talwandi
 Sabo has decided to establish the '
Bhai
Mardana
ji
' Chair on the
occasion
 of Sri
Guru
 Nanak Dev Ji's 550th birth
Anniversery
the date on which an event occurred in some previous year (or the celebration of it)
anniversary
anniversaries
. Bathinda (
Talwandi
 Sabo November 5), a renowned educational institution,
Guru
Kashi
 University, will set up a
Bhai
Mardana
 Chair on the
occasion
 of Sri
Guru
 Nanak Dev Ji's 550th birth
Anniversery
the date on which an event occurred in some previous year (or the celebration of it)
anniversary
anniversaries
.
Honable
Suggestion
Honourable
 Chancellor of University Dr. JS Dhaliwal said that GKU is committed to connecting the new generation with our old heritage, music and ragas. A separate music department will be set up in which students will be given a 2-year diploma course, 3-year degree course and 1 year certificate course for classical
raags
the melodic modes of Indian music
ragas
. The
specialty
an asset of special worth or utility
speciality
Specialty
 of
this
 department is that there will be no separate fees other than the registration fee for the students. On
this
occasion
, he
also
 informed that a separate High Level Advisory Committee has been constituted to establish the
Bhai
Mardana
 Chair.
This
 committee will be constituted by Former Vice Chancellor of
Guru
 Nanak Dev University (Amritsar) Dr. S.P Singh, Former Vice Chancellor of
Guru
Kashi
 University (
Talwandi
 Sabo) Dr.
Nachatar
Suggestion
Nectar
 Singh
,
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,
 Dr. Gurnam Singh, Principal of Music Department (Punjabi
University Patiala
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University, Patiala
), Principal Sukhwant Singh (Taksal
wale
a raised mark on the skin (as produced by the blow of a whip); characteristic of many allergic reactions
Wale
), Prof.
Gurbhajan
Singh Former
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Singh, Former
 President of Punjabi Sahitya Academy (Ludhiana), Sh. Amardeep Singh Grewal (Former
Director Punjab
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Director, Punjab
 Technical University
,
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,
Jalandhar), Dr. Satnam Singh Jassal (
Dean Professor
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Dean, Professor
 of Basic Science
Guru
Kashi
 University
,
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,
Talwandi
 Sabo) and Former Prof. Of Music Ms. Jagdeep Kaur (Government College for Women Ludhiana).
This
 committee has suggested that a chair dedicated to
Bhai
Mardana
 Ji should
estalblished
set up or found
establish
 with regulatory person
such
 as one Chairman and two visiting Prof. To be scholars of music and Gurmat
kirtan
. On
this
occasion
, Sh.
Sukhraj
 Singh Sidhu and Sh. Sukhwinder Singh expressed his happiness.

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