Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In today's

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, the necessity of

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has ever-increasing. Even

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it is widely seen international

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has a massive contribution to the global economy. Some individuals believe that global

tourism

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is responsible for creating tensions among countries rather than keeping people and cultures in the same umbrella. I strongly disagree with

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view because international

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offers economic growth as well as

brings

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bring

people, culture and customs together.

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, a tourist is always welcomed and treated as a guest in each corner of the

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. To serve the guest there is a number of local and global business has developed.

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, the travel industry has an enormous impact on the global economy, companies like Agoda, Airbnb doing business based on

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at the international level.

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, the reputation of a country significantly depends on what tourists experienced during his visit to that country. Above

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industry has the biggest impact on the

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economy.

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, the

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industry plays a pivotal role to reduce cultural differences and bringing the

world

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population together.

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Chrismas

a Christian holiday celebrating the birth of Christ; a quarter day in England, Wales, and Ireland

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is widely celebrated in the western

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, if a tourist visit those regions will understand the gravity of

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festival and will show respect to the people of the same religion stayed in his country.

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, there are always some countries having diplomatic issues with other countries, but global

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can be a bridge to pave the way to resolution of those conflicts. In conclusion, I firmly believe international

tourism

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can not be a reason for creating global tensions, rather it is a sound medium to

brings

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bring

countries and people together.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of helth and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some people believe that only employees who have worked at a company for a long time deserve to be promoted to a higher position. What is your opinion about this?

In the future, people may nolonger be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? why do you think some people might not be happy using cash?

University students nowadays have too much freedom and do not study enough. To what extent do you agree and disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and examples.