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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In today's
world
, the necessity of
tourism
 has ever-increasing. Even
in
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after
 it is widely seen international
tourism
 has a massive contribution to the global economy. Some individuals believe that global
tourism
 is responsible for creating tensions among countries rather than keeping people and cultures in the same umbrella. I strongly disagree with
this
 view because international
tourism
 offers economic growth as well as
brings
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bring
 people, culture and customs together.
Firstly
, a tourist is always welcomed and treated as a guest in each corner of the
world
. To serve the guest there is a number of local and global business has developed.
For example
, the travel industry has an enormous impact on the global economy, companies like Agoda, Airbnb doing business based on
tourism
 at the international level.
Moreover
, the reputation of a country significantly depends on what tourists experienced during his visit to that country. Above
all
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all, this
this
 industry has the biggest impact on the
world
 economy.
Secondly
, the
tourism
 industry plays a pivotal role to reduce cultural differences and bringing the
world
 population together.
For instance
,
Chrismas
a Christian holiday celebrating the birth of Christ; a quarter day in England, Wales, and Ireland
Christmas
 is widely celebrated in the western
world
, if a tourist visit those regions will understand the gravity of
this
 festival and will show respect to the people of the same religion stayed in his country.
Nevertheless
, there are always some countries having diplomatic issues with other countries, but global
tourism
 can be a bridge to pave the way to resolution of those conflicts. In conclusion, I firmly believe international
tourism
 can not be a reason for creating global tensions, rather it is a sound medium to
brings
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bring
 countries and people together.
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