World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.

Peace and prosperity are not bound to genders. We can not make discrimination between men and women
for
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in
their
leadership
skills. We know that women are rubbing shoulders with men in
this
era.
On
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At
In
different times leaders
from
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of
both
gender
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genders
prove
themselves but
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themselves, but
sometime it varies on other factors and situations. On
First
hand, many times it happened that countries made attack on each other during
men
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men's
man's
leadership but
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leadership, but
it was due to terrorism, religious differences and nuclear power which were the key
elemets
violent or severe weather (viewed as caused by the action of the four elements)
elements
of the war
such
as Nagasaki and
Heroshima
a port city on the southwestern coast of Honshu in Japan; on August 6, 1945 Hiroshima was almost completely destroyed by the first atomic bomb dropped on a populated area
Hiroshima
attack. But in women
leadership
many countries face national emergency issues due to
violent
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violence
in country as here we can take
example
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the example
of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
, when Indra Gandhi was prime minister of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
she had done discrimination on religion
thats
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that's
why people from
Sikh religion
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the Sikh religion
killed her to take their revenge and ultimately it disturb the peace of
country
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the country
.
Besides
that there are many
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
which are ruled by
men but
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men, but
thay
people in general
they
that
have
least number
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the least number
of crime, violence and
war
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war, then
then
it would be
unjustice
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an injustice
injustice
to target the
gender
based on their
leadership
skills. On the other aspects, the peace of society and countries are disturbed by down
economiocs
the branch of social science that deals with the production and distribution and consumption of goods and services and their management
economics
economies
economic
, crime and poverty.
when
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When
people are not satisfied
from
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with
their
life
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life, then
then
they try to choose
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
way to bring satisfaction.
leaders
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Leaders
can be with any
gender but they
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gender, but they
should have
knowledge
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the knowledge
to create
bond
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bonds
with other countries, strengthen the economy and avoid the war for
welfare
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the welfare
of the nation.
these
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These
real duties
can be perform
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can perform
can be performed
by any leader with any
gender
. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would say that we
can not
can not
cannot
decide
gender
to rule the
country but
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country, but
we can choose a wise person who have good
leadership
skills and know how to perform duties under any
circumsatnces
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
. Men and women
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
showed
give equal chances.

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