World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.
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for
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leadership
skills. We know that women are rubbing shoulders with men in this
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men's
man's
leadership but
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leadership, but
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of the war violent or severe weather (viewed as caused by the action of the four elements)
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as Nagasaki and Heroshima
attack. But in women a port city on the southwestern coast of Honshu in Japan; on August 6, 1945 Hiroshima was almost completely destroyed by the first atomic bomb dropped on a populated area
Hiroshima
leadership
many countries face national emergency issues due to violent
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violence
example
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the example
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India
india
she had done discrimination on religion a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
thats
why people from Suggestion
that's
Sikh religion
killed her to take their revenge and ultimately it disturb the peace of Suggestion
the Sikh religion
country
. Suggestion
the country
Besides
that there are many countires
which are ruled by a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
men but
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men, but
thay
have people in general
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that
least number
of crime, violence and Suggestion
the least number
war
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war, then
then
it would be unjustice
to target the Suggestion
an injustice
injustice
gender
based on their leadership
skills.
On the other aspects, the peace of society and countries are disturbed by down economiocs
, crime and poverty. the branch of social science that deals with the production and distribution and consumption of goods and services and their management
economics
economies
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when
people are not satisfied Suggestion
When
from
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life, then
then
they try to choose other
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gender, but they
knowledge
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the knowledge
bond
with other countries, strengthen the economy and avoid the war for Suggestion
bonds
welfare
of the nation. Suggestion
the welfare
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can be perform
by any leader with any Suggestion
can perform
can be performed
gender
.
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I
can not
decide can not
cannot
gender
to rule the country but
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country, but
leadership
skills and know how to perform duties under any circumsatnces
. Men and women your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
shoud
give equal chances.expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
showed
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