Task 2 : Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Humans

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Human

beings have always been fond of extremities.

This

has accurately been reflected

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the increasing interest and

rate

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the rate

of people flocking the Sahara or the Antarctic. Visiting the cold places gives you an insight and understanding of the weather, the geography, the way it functions. You understand the people and know their lifestyle. There is an empathetic relation with few debunking of the locally prevalent myths. Ice capped mountains or

cold barren

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cold, barren

lands are scenic and carry the beauty with grace. The dessert enhances your tolerance for uncertainties, broadens your horizons, makes you ready for the worst to come bringing in the peace of mind you wander for. Life in dessert is difficult, risky and you understand how resourceful the water is.

However

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the Bold

is the

preference

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preferred

to explore the cold or

daring choice

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the daring choice

of facing the sand might seem, the other side of the coin exists. The inevitable impact on the atmosphere due to increasing emissions, threatens the nature. Disturbs the cycle as a whole. Hampering the entire ecosystem, disturbing the thriving flora and fauna, resources are exploited and the trash is left behind. Unawareness of the weather might lead fatal situations. Travelling is indeed fun; it makes you wise. But the choice still remains! Make sure you grow and prosper with knowledge and empathy, letting yourself breeze in the long night or a never-ending day. But be sure, you are ready, never

underprepared

and fiercely protective to the nature that nurtures you. Rest assured, the change of paradigm in

interest hopefully

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interest, hopefully

brings on the change we are in desperate need of.

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Task 2 : Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Fully explain your ideas

Government should allow students to pay fee after graducation or it should be free? which one is best?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

You have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter: Describe the problem the new employee has caused Explain how other employees about the new employee’s conduct Say how you expect the HR manager to address the situation.