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Task 2 : Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Humans
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Human
 beings have always been fond of extremities.
This
 has accurately been reflected
on
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in
 the increasing interest and
rate
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the rate
 of people flocking the Sahara or the Antarctic. Visiting the cold places gives you an insight and understanding of the weather, the geography, the way it functions. You understand the people and know their lifestyle. There is an empathetic relation with few debunking of the locally prevalent myths. Ice capped mountains or
cold barren
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cold, barren
 lands are scenic and carry the beauty with grace. The dessert enhances your tolerance for uncertainties, broadens your horizons, makes you ready for the worst to come bringing in the peace of mind you wander for. Life in dessert is difficult, risky and you understand how resourceful the water is.
However
,
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the Bold
 is the
preference
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preferred
 to explore the cold or
daring choice
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the daring choice
 of facing the sand might seem, the other side of the coin exists. The inevitable impact on the atmosphere due to increasing emissions, threatens the nature. Disturbs the cycle as a whole. Hampering the entire ecosystem, disturbing the thriving flora and fauna, resources are exploited and the trash is left behind. Unawareness of the weather might lead fatal situations. Travelling is indeed fun; it makes you wise. But the choice still remains! Make sure you grow and prosper with knowledge and empathy, letting yourself breeze in the long night or a never-ending day. But be sure, you are ready, never
underprepared
 and fiercely protective to the nature that nurtures you. Rest assured, the change of paradigm in
interest hopefully
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interest, hopefully
 brings on the change we are in desperate need of.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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