International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages.

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new era of civilization, there is an

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in the number of nations that now open their entrance to many tourists as international travel has become c

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cheaper

In my opinion, despite the benefits of job opportunities as well as an

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in the economic growth from the rise in the number of tourists, the drawbacks of

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are greater than them. Admittedly, having growing tourism has some advantages.

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, opportunities in employment occur when d

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doors, two

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nations are o

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to visitors due to the

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in the need for human labour to meet up with the demands of efficiently running the tourist centres.

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will result in a rapid and an eventual boost of the standard of living of the citizens.

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, there would

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be a drastic growth in the economy of

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a country.

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is because huge resources f

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the payment of taxes and other means of generating funds would raise enough revenue for the government.

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, there are several demerits of growing t

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tourism, which

are detrimental, both to the environment and people living there.

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in pollution which occurs from the frequent use of cars to commute tourists in and out of the country is the main problem of

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growth.

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, there is an emission of carbon dioxide from the automobiles, thereby leading to the rising sea level.

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could lead to serious disasters, especially flood which could lead to loss of properties and death of many innocent lives. Another drawback is the loss of m

orals common

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morals, common

amongst the citizens owing to the wrongful exposure to visitors, who are tourists.

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, the ethics of

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uch nation would

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such a nation would

be lost. In conclusion,

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there are many merits of opening countries doors to improve tourism, the demerits of the threat of global warming from air pollution and loss of morals cannot be overlooked as these could be dangerous to both the population and the nation safety.