In many countries, some people live with their families while studying,but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities.Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantage?

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It
is a fact that a lot of young people prefer to attend universities in other cities leaving their parents'
home
when they complete their graduation from high schools.Since they continue their higher education, they want to live independently.
This
step has its own pros and cons
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but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages. Today
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the world has become more competitive than before. With the growing advancements and modernization, aspiration for a better lifestyle has
also
increased. Young people always try to cope up with the fast-moving world.
Therefore
, they move away from parents and
home
to study as well as to have notable experiences which will help them not only to grow mentally but
also
in different aspects of life. On the one hand, many people believe that leaving parents'
home
during the young age has disadvantages. It is undeniable that many young students are not ready yet to live separately by themselves. When they move out, they are totally unaware of the world and its challenges.They
initially
feel isolated and sometimes feel homesick.
This
can lead to depression, if they
dont
do not
don't
find a way to get rid of it.
On the other hand
, despite the disadvantages, living independently at the young age has many advantages.
Firstly
, they will learn how to manage their own lives and appreciate the time. They will learn how to set some priorities in their lives as they have to make a schedule for studying, grocery shopping, doing laundry or cleaning their apartment by themselves.They can do part-time jobs to bear the expenses of their studies
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,
food and accommodation and so on.
Therefore
, they can reduce the burden of
expenses
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the expenses
of their parents.The experience living far from
home
makes them more responsible which is effective and important for their future.
Finally
experiencing the different phases of life and learning from them can be possible, which will make them think rationally and take proper decisions. In conclusion, living away from
home
while continuing higher studies has a positive impact on young people as they start to learn
living
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to live
their lives by themselves
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Accept space
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which lead them to take their own responsibilities and managing their lives accurately rather than depending on their families.
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