Children find it difficult to pay attention or concentrate on school study what are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

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is unfortunate that today, juveniles find it daunting to focus on their
study
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in
school
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phenomenon has manifold responsible factors
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can be mitigated with certain rigid actions. There are numerous reasons why children
are not concentrate
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don't concentrate
do not concentrate
have not concentrated
on
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study
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with, children cannot feel fresh and active because, cause of sleep deprivation. According to new research it
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has happened
happens
along increasing technology they live in
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a saturated culture
saturated culture
where everyone rely on technology.
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, children spend more time on play video games,
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Facebook
and WhatsApp use for communication with their friends. There are
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other causes of
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situation. Children are not able to cope up with though academic
competition
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competition, then
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they do not take interest in their
study
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, they cannot
study
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in noisy atmosphere and in
school
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they
district
draw someone's attention away from something
distract
to
activities
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the activities
of other learners. What is more,
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children affected by
medical condition
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medical conditions
a medical condition
the medical condition
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as attention deficit disorder. There are certain solution to alleviate
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complication.
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, parents and teacher ought to learn to be responsible and they should help
student
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the student
students
in studies. Along with
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, children need break after 30 minutes
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, they do concentrate on their
study
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in
better way
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a better way
and not feel dull.
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of
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,
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teachers
a teacher
the teacher
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given
school
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work in
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the limit
and easy.
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, parents should try that their children
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get
at least eight hours uninterrupted sleep and they should talk with their
children
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child's
children's
doctor and have a routine physical performance. To
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conclude
, children of
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contemporary society have many
distrations
mental turmoil
distractions
distortions
on account of which they find it challenging to concentrate at
school
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,
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can be dealt with very nicely by
combined efforts
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the combined efforts
of parents and teachers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immediate gratification
  • diverse learning preferences
  • one-size-fits-all approach
  • disengagement
  • nutritional factors
  • processed foods
  • energy spikes and crashes
  • cognitive function
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • integrate
  • promote
  • diversify
  • incorporate
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