Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it's wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Marriage is the most important decision to make in a life. Committing to be with someone
for
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in
your whole life requires a lot of courage.
This
decision involves the big question of why you should marry? For
money
or for love? In
this
world full of unfocused and uncertain people, it is wiser to come up with an option which gives you happiness in the long run. Being in love is one of the most beautiful things which one could experience.
Firstly
, it is a bond between two people who promise to support each other in all their joys and sorrows.
Secondly
, your significant other half should inspire you in magical ways. Performing a ritual to tie a knot with someone you trust, gives you a sense of comfort and assurance that
this
person
is not going to leave you ever. You have an understanding with the other
person
, which can keep the marriage alive. You are aware of each other's likes and dislikes and can face any hurdles which comes in a relationship. Unfortunately, we all don't live in a perfect world. People today tend to be more attracted to the idea of earning
money
instead
of love. Many older people advise their children to marry someone with a big bank balance. They believe that
money
can buy happiness,
however
, it cannot be bought in any possible way.
For example
, In India, there is a big activity of arranged marriage, in which the parents chose the partner for their children. How wealthy is the other
person
, plays an important part in coming up with a decision.
Money
is just a show off. Even the wealthiest
person
in the world can be lonely. People need to understand that
money
is not the solution for all the problems in life. There are all
kind
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kinds
of people, good and bad, it is just the matter of finding the right one. Together, by putting equal efforts and
hardwork
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hard work
, a couple can earn millions of dollars with each other's support.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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