In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people tend to go to big shopping malls rather than small shops. I think that it is a negative
devolopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
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however it
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however, it
is not awful to shop from big malls and it
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depending
on peoples choice
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First
and foremost, if people start to go to big
shooping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
malls avoiding small ones
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small market owner' will face loss in
busines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
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Eventually
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it might have profound on
county's economy
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the county's economy
, sometimes may create unemployment problem
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For instance
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in my
locality few
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locality, few
shop owners closed down their
groceries
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grocery
shop because of having less
cutomer
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customers
customer
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facing unemployment problem right now.With a view to removing
such
unusual problems
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people should start to buy necessary products
form
a giver or sender
from
local markets.
Moreover
, in
big shopping malls price
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the big shopping malls price
of products is expensive than local
shops
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shops, although
although
quality is better
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It is not possible for poor publics to buy product from there since they do shopping from local markets in affordable price.
For instance
, one of my friends
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always buy clothes from local market and if
this
markets
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market
closed down
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he will be in big problem. To conclude
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local shops value is indispensable despite big shopping malls are providing
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many
advantages
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for
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For
livelihood or sometimes for poor people local shops
plays
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play
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pivotal role.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail outlets
  • consumer behavior
  • shop locally
  • convenience
  • variety
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • community
  • personal touch
  • small businesses
  • local economy
  • big corporations
  • dependence
  • shopping habits
  • urbanization
  • globalization
  • competition
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