Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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When considering the effects of technology on our quality of life, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people believe that modern developments,

such

as the

cellphones

Suggestion

cell phones

, tablets and computers, have a negative effect on our lifestyle. Others, including myself, think that technological appliances have an important role in improving our

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

. In the following essay, I will provide arguments and examples to support my opinion. One of the main daily functions, where modern technologies have improved people's quality of life, is cooking. For many years, cooking was a long process, often taking hours, and even days, in order to make basic materials,

such

as bread, jam and cheese. With the introduction of modern machines, like the mixer, refrigerator and electrical stove, these processes have

shortend

cut short

shortened

substantially, which gives people much more

leisor

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

leis or

time. The process of making bread

for example

, that previously required at least two hours, can now be done by pressing a button in a bread making machine.

This

example illustrates that modern machines allow us to have much more free time,

consequently

improving our lifestyle. Another example supporting my opinion is that modern technologies permits people to enjoy many

leisor

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

leis or

activites

any specific behavior

activities

such

as seeing a

movies

Suggestion

movie

, playing video games, and reading news on the internet. While in previous years, people had to go to the local book store in order to buy the daily newspaper or other reading materials, nowadays people can read the media instantly online.

Similarly

, modern technologies allow people to enjoy high quality movies in their homes, by using flat screen televisions and surround

sount

the particular auditory effect produced by a given cause

sound

systems, rather than

going

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to the cinema.

This

illustrates, that modern developments

provides

Suggestion

provide

people with new

leisor

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

leis or

laser

activites

any specific behavior

activities

at home, which were not

evailable

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

previously. In conclusion, I believe that modern appliances improve people's

lifstyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyles

by shorting daily processes, and providing new activities at home, which were not possible before.

Further technological development

Suggestion

The further technological development

will

also

be beneficial, and should be promoted.

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