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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

#students #access #information #libraries
In
this
 age of technology Accessing material online has gotten easier over the years and
this
 process is making local libraries not needed. It is my opinion that libraries are no longer needed since
information
 is so easily accessible online. The internet has just as much if not more,
information
 readily available. The internet is updated every day by different sources and
this
 makes the data you are getting more is not outdated
.
Accept space
.
Needless to say, some websites are more worthy of your trust than others, but the same is true of printed material as well. Everything that can be found in an encyclopedia, dictionary or book has been online just a click away.
Furthermore
, A student can purchase a book need for a class or just for leisure reading and have it on their electronic devices to be used at their own convenience. While the
library
 has a lot of useful
information
 it might be more inconvenient for a student to get to the
library
.
Instead
 of going to the
library
, a student can locate
information
 needed for assignment quickly.
Moreover
, Going to the
library
 may take more time than one has once you include both travelling to the
library
 and the time it takes to locate what is needed. In conclusion, there are many benefits to getting data on the internet

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