Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there are a lot of children who like to spend their free time playing games, reading books or going out with friends. Most parents want their kids to go out and enjoy leisure activities, but the others think that the children should read books to gain more interesting and helpful knowledge.

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, not just for fun like going out, reading books help children to relax and learn about new things too. I am not totally agree with the statement that has given.

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, when reading books, children can learn more new things in the world.

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: when reading red riding hood, from the naughty girl in the

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, we can learn that we shouldn’t trust new people and we have to listen to our parents and do what they say.

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, many children find that reading books make them relax and they just want to read more because the

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is usually very interesting.

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but not least, children can learn to read at a young age because parents could teach children how to read the book in an interesting way.

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, reading books still have some disadvantages.

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, when kids don’t know how to read books

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the right way, they will place their eyes too near the page and that leads to bad eyesight.

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, there are some children that are addicted in entertaining books, so sometimes, they neglect school and have bad marks.

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, there are some books that contain bad information, the child is too young to understand

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bad, so they keep reading and cause harm in their normal mental growth. To conclude,

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reading

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books do have some disadvantages. I think both the children and other people can overcome

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and make

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a reading story

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book an interesting and helpful activity for children. I am not completely agree with the statement that

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Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree.

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Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

The linegraph gives information about the number of production (in million tonnes) of pulp, timber and paper in European country between 1980 and 2000