Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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nce t
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For
he
last
four decades, technological advances is
increasingly becoming v
Suggestion
are increasingly becoming
ery common especially regarding electronic books. While some people believe traditional public libraries should exist in fu
ture irrespective o
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the future irrespective
f their ma
intaienance c
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
ost, other are strongly opposed to it. In
this
essay, I will discuss why computers are much efficient
instead
of public libraries. There are many compelling reasons to believe that with the advancement of technology any document can be preserved for longer duration as compared to ol
d m
Suggestion
older
ethods of maintaining records
such
as research papers and books.
This
is because with the help of hard disk or hard drive in the computer, an individual can ea
ily m
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
aintain that any paper base record by scanning it on his or her system for decades. In London,
for instance
, Br
itish Museum h
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the British Museum
as been consistently secured the th
eoratical h
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
istory of their country in electronic form so that there is no wastage of unnecessary funds of the government. If civic bodies co
ntinues t
Suggestion
continue
o use public taxes for maintaining these libraries th
an c
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
learly it is a wastage of technological inventions, time and money. There is no doubt that old journals, articles and renowned publications could be more se
cured a
Suggestion
secure
nd ea
ily a
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
ccessible to ge
neral public a
Suggestion
the general public
cross anywhere in the world if they are saved on electronic devices rather than few public libraries. Any type of file and document can be transferred easily from one location to another with the help of free internet connection or bare minimum charges if we upload all the data on computer devices.
For instance
, majority number of de
veloped c
Suggestion
developing
ountries ha
s shifted t
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have shifted
heir non-confidential physical data to on
line platform s
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the online platform
o that anyone can have free access to it. Though some old school people still pr
efers t
Suggestion
prefer
he ambience of traditional public libraries, but that changes the fact that a lot of resources are being wasted in order to preserve
such
libraries. In conclusion, undoubtedly the government must see the unforeseen advantages of replacing public libraries via technology so that taxes of citizens can be utilized in a right manner. I strongly admit that, gradually shifting to technology and mi
niminsimg u
nwanted wastage is a gr
eater s
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great
tep towards future of any country.
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  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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