The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, where at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer, and include any revelent examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issue of whether the teenagers must join the essential

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service or not is certainly a controversial topic. Despite some people argued that it is pros outweighed cons.I personally disagree with that. The following examples will illustrate my point of views.

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, based on the economic value

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,

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facilities can be replaced human

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beings, not

only for the duration of function but

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the expanse. In one word, it can

fulfill

put in effect

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the demands of people.

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,

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the government

can purchase the high-tech tank or automatic weapon which is controlled by machine and they can be operated properly more than a real human being.

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, a well-trained

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takes around 3 to 5 years to finish their training while the automatic weapon can be operated right after we purchased it.

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, citizens need to pay for a well-trained

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salary until he passes away. In my opinion

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I would like to pay tax for long-term used facilities rather than an

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.

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, I generally believe that teenagers should attend schools to acquire knowledge

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of join military. As like the topic mentioned about, most of the children in the world are without occupations and talents for employment and

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fit as if by joints

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military cannot provide them a well education to gain more practical skills to find a proper job.

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, a study showed that a teenager who joined

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the military

did not acquire any general knowledge while the others who went to school obtained a numerous skill from

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educational centres

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and they found a proper job afterward. It goes without saying that joining the compulsory military service for children is not beneficial for them,

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, it is a somewhat negative. In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that I disagree necessary military activity is

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positively

and essential for teenagers.

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, I believe that it is not an appropriate way to do so based on economic value and the importance of education for youth.