Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

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The
government
of any
country
owes
her
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citizens an
overall
duty of protecting their interests.
This
is why they were elected into office in the first place. A family, which makes up part of the
country
, equally owes its
country
some reasonable measure of responsibility in ensuring good and smooth governance. Having established the symbiotic relationship between a
government
and a family, it is imperative to succinctly examine one of the ways by which the
government
provides for the needs of
her
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citizenry. One of the means is through
payment
of
tax
.
Tax
is the money paid on
income
generated over a particular period of time. It is usually deducted monthly. The major ideology behind its
payment
is to develop the
country
. It is one of the several revenues a
country
has. It is calculated based on a particular percentage. The higher your
income
, the higher your
tax
! It's been laid down in
such
a way that it is fair and crosses across both the upper and lower classes. In a family of four, which consists of
father
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a father
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, mother and two
children
; if the father pays a third of his salary as
tax
, and his wife pays an amount close to his, that cuts down on their
income
for the month.
This
is an
income
that is
not ordinarily enough to cater for the entire family before
tax
.
This
would help the family plan their lives better.
For instance
, in Nigeria, the highest
number
of
children
expected of a couple is four. Looking at the instance of the family cited above, since their incomes are taxable, thereby reducing their
income
for the month, they would have to think twice before they could plan to have another baby because, the cost of catering for a child, from the point of conception to the legal age of eighteen, when the child could fend for himself or herself, can be jaw-breaking! Usually in Nigeria, which is the case study here, an average parent would fend for their
children
till they graduate from a higher institution of learning. There have been cases where
children
who lacked the basics of life turned out to be louts. They fended for themselves from an early age in life, wandered around
the
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society and eventually, some of them,
due to
peer pressure, gave way to criminal activities and ended up as
menace
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a menace
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to the same society. I can recall vividly,
a
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girl of sixteen, who lacked parental care
due to
financial
constraint
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constraints
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, went into prostitution in order to make ends meet. She later contracted HIV, spread the disease unknowingly and increased the
number
of people living with the virus, which is against the goal of the Nigerian
government
in the fight against the spread of the virus.
This
would of course cost the
government
more money in the sensitization exercise, prevention and treatment of HIV. Aside
the
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above, as the
number
of citizens
increase
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increases
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, so does the expenditure of the
government
. There would be more money to allot to each sector of the economy to ensure citizens are well taken care of. You cut your coat
according to
your
cloth
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. When the expenses of a family
is
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'curtailed' through
tax
payment
, it becomes logical for them to engage in family planning, so they can birth only the
number
of
children
they can reasonably cater for. In conclusion, I strongly agree that the
government
should control the population through the
number
of
children
someone has by enforcing the
payment
of
tax
,
although
, that may not be the only way.
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