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Nagarjun Murali, Simmakkal, Madurai. +91-7639495656 The
Scholarship
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Sheffield
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Hallam
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University
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. To Whom It May Concern: My name is
Nagarjun
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Nagarjuna
Murali and I am writing
in
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application
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for Transform
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scholarship
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to assist me throughout my
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studying
in
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the Msc Big Data Analytics
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Sheffield
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Hallam
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Being awarded the chance to study
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in the big data field at
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Sheffield
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Hallam
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is an incredible opportunity for me and one I intend to seize wholeheartedly without reservation.
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my parents never went to college they always valued quality education over money since
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was a kid. So I do understand the importance of education and what empowerment it can bring. My family has made many sacrifices to allow me to focus on education throughout my undergraduate degree. I now have an opportunity to become the first person in my family to get
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masters
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degree from an international
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, though I'm in need of financial assistance to realize what has been a long-term goal for me and a dream for my parents. Despite financial hardship during my college years, I have always done what is necessary to
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my studies and
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experience.
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includes a full month of Pro Bono
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helping the poor here in Konthagai village as a part of
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voluntary college
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.The Pro Bono
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gave me a new perspective towards helping others and it
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made me unique among my classmates, Since I was the only one
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for the
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camp. In my
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during Cognizant
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, I
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stood out from my colleagues by volunteering
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the
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senior citizens to get to know about the latest technology to connect with their loved ones post my
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shift timings. If
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successful in obtaining the
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, I'm fairly confident in myself that I can turn out to be
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unique student ambassador for
Sheffield
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Hallam
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University
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. Relocating from Madurai, India for the duration of the
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represents a huge challenge and
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it is one I am fully committed to, it does present considerable financial strain. I will be doing my utmost to not let
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my participation and concentration required to gain as much as I can from the
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.
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scholarship
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represents to me an opportunity to fully focus my attention on the main objective of achieving the best I can in the Big Data
analytics
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program
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. I will strive to be a representative and ambassador of
Sheffield
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Hallam
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University
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during the educational
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period and
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throughout my future career and am very thankful to be able to attend
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course. I thank you for taking the
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to evaluate
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application and look forward to arriving in
Sheffield
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soon. Sincerely, Nagarjun Murali

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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