Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

Day to day increase in living expenses are
making
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made
each individual
work
for earning themselves. To decrease the stress that arose during
work
with an increase in technology and
introduction
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the introduction
of many time-saving gadgets like washing machines and system-driven robotic devices, citizen's life has made much easier.
However
, a certain group of people
believe
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believes
and argue that these appliances make it more difficult. I completely agree with the opinion that, modern technology will undoubtedly decrease the stress. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will
through
propel through the air
throw
some light on how these gadgets helping human beings. The motto behind the invention of any electronic gadgets are to reduce the human intervention to decrease the efforts, time and release stress. In these modern and
competative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
world, with the increased responsibilities and deliveries, everyone
strive
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strives
to
work
hard beyond their duty times
with
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to
focus
minded
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minds
to deliver the projects
ontime
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on time
to impress their clients and bosses. In the process, they have to use many electronic gadgets to
speedup
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speed up
the
work
.
Couple
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A couple
of examples, A xerox machine which helps to take a photocopy,
instead
of writing the whole thing on a new paper, A
waching
the work of cleansing (usually with soap and water)
washing
machine at home to wash & completely dry the clothes to eliminate the human
intevention
the act of intervening (as to mediate a dispute, etc.)
intervention
. There are
numorous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
electronic devices to count
on which
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on, which
will make the
people
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person's
peoples'
life easier. But,
on the other hand
, some group of people
comtradicts
be in contradiction with
contradicts
contradict
with
this
statement keeping the
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
health in mind. They believe that people are becoming lazy by avoiding day to day routine
work
by depending on these gadgets, which will eventually lead to health problems like
obecity
more than average fatness
obesity
and eventually to heart attacks. In conclusion, Its
undeniable fact
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an undeniable fact
that the electronic gadgets obviously make people life easier.
However
, it is
also
important that people should be mindful of the fact that health
also
important, so they should use manual methods to do some tasks like not using elevators which keeps them fit and healthy.
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