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Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?

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With the development of new technologies, people’s life is now more comfortable than it was in the past. In these days it is almost unimaginable that one modern household functions without refrigerators, washing machines, microwave oven, and other appliances. A rapid development of these technologies brings with
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 a lot of advantages, but negatively
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 these useful technological devices have on humans and
environment
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the environment
 could not be ignored. With today’s available
consumer
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 goods, people do not have much trouble to keep their foods or clothes in the condition that will be useful for them in every occasion. Time spent in preparation of food, washing or ironing of clothes, is far less these days than it used to be in the past, and thanks to new technologies. Just
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a hundred years
 ago it was unimaginable that you could keep your meats and other food items for months, to prepare some meals in just a couple of minutes or to wash a large number of clothes in just 30 minutes.
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 the biggest advantage of these
consumer
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 goods, Modern people spend far less time in doing house chores than they used to. In
this
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 way, people can save time, and time is the most valuable aspect
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of
 the modern society. But,
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, use of appliances in
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 huge quantity brings with
itself higher
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energy
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 consumptions that lead to a higher environmental pollution all around the world. Since most of our
energy
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 is produced from the fossil fuels and coals,
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 increasing of
energy
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 consumption will lead to greater consumption of these non-renewable resources of
energy
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 which harm our environment. Even today the Earth is on the highest level of pollution in its history. So it is understandable why people warn on use and overuse of
consumer
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 goods. At the end, modern appliances are invented to make people’s life easier and they are successful in that, but the question is- 'what cost it will
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bind
 us to pay?' I am sure that in the future these
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 goods will be more
energy
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 efficient with lesser
energy
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 consumptions for their work, and that will still make the life of people easier and more convenient like they do today.
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