Some people think men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

It has been obvious that there is a wide variety of natural qualities between males and females.

Therefore

, there is a common belief that

men

are more competitive than women because of their nature. I partially concur with

this

sentiment because there are natural and external influences on them.

This

will be

further

shown by analyzing

men

’s commitments as an external influential factor in their mindset and their natural physical skills influence.

To begin

with,

men

think competitively

as a result

of their commitments. They are involved in many business and family obligations which motivate them to achieve their targets.

For example

, many high-qualified middle-aged

men

, in Egypt, compete to get

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the

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leadership positions in their corporations

due to

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its

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benefits. These benefits ensure a career with prospects

to

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them

as well as

meet their families’ needs.

Hence

, responsibilities play an incentive factor

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their way of thinking.

On the other hand

, natural physical differences between males and females encourage them to be quite competitive than women. To clarify, a myriad of

men

are well-built naturally and

this

encourage

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them to show off their physical skills and enjoy

the

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sense of personal success. To illustrate, a recent study by the Gulf Cooperation Council (GCC)

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founds

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that about 80% of Arabian athletic

men

participate in one-on-one

sport

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competitions,

whereas

the same percentage of Arabian sportswomen compete in team sports. As

this

example

shown

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, unless they have

their

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well-built qualities, they

could not

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compete individually.

Hence

,

men

’s physical skills motivate them to be naturally

competitive

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than women. In conclusion, having demonstrated the above-mentioned explanations of

men

’s competitive character, it seems to me that

men

think and behave competitively

due to

external

influence

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namely their responsibilities.

However

, their nature as a well-built creature makes them naturally

incline

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to be competitive.