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Every man has a right to proper healthcare.However,private hospitals nowadays are so profit oriented that they are distracted from providing proper healthcare facilities. In your opinion,is this profit making tendency a hindrance to proper healthcare ?

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It is true that every citizen has a right to get proper
healthcare
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health care
 facilities.
However
, I understand that at present, medical science has been invented many equipment’s, machines as well as apparatus, which enhances medical
treatment
, services and applications that are increasing
total
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the total amount
amount
 of cost in
healthcare
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health care
 organization.
To begin
 with, for giving aesthetic and worthy
treatment
, many private oriented hospitals have to purchase various kinds of machines and materials, whose prices are very high and are needed profuse
amount
 of
money
 for
bring
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bringing
 these modern tactics.
This
types
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type
 of investment
are increasing
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is increasing
total
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the total amount
amount
 of cost for patients. It can be observed that many private
hospital
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hospitals
,
moreover
, have been
made
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making
 their organization by renting
house
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a house
the house
 from others, where owners have to deal many amenities with house owners. Many developing and underdeveloped countries in Asian continents,
for example
, where many owners were
built their
Accept comma addition
built, their
 cherished hospital by making
agreement
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an agreement
agreements
 in
renting process
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the renting process
. Increasing citizen facilities in
private hospital
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a private hospital
 has to spend
numerous
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numerous amounts
a numerous amount
amount
 of
money
 in case of medicine, housekeeping, lighting and cooling or air condition and so on.
On the other hand
,
rising
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the rising amount
amount
 of
money
 in
private medical sector
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the private medical sector
 has had some negative impacts for
individual citizen
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the individual citizen
individual citizens
. The
first
 and most reason is that many people go to private oriented hospital for getting better medical care that they cannot get other oriented hospital’s a matter of fact, they suffer from wrong
treatment
 from desired hospital and many of them have lost their
life
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lives
 by the name of
treatment
.
In other words
, many people lead their lives with hardship because they cannot earn lots of
money
that is
 needed in their families.
Therefore
, the modern
healthcare
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health care
 is a
day dream
have a daydream; indulge in a fantasy
daydream
 for them. In conclusion,
although
, modern
healthcare
 amenities are very sagacious for everyone.
However
, many private organizations
are oriented their
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are oriented to their
 business in order to earn a lot of
money
, but all are not same.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Universal healthcare
  • Privatization
  • Profit-driven
  • Accessibility
  • Patient care
  • Healthcare system
  • Public sector
  • Medical ethics
  • Healthcare disparities
  • Regulatory framework
  • Equitable access
  • Health insurance
  • Quality of care
  • Corporate responsibility
  • Stakeholders
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