Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In lieu of having a better life, most people had started demanding options for the

every thing

all things

everything

. Nowadays, it

its

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

believed that people have more options to

chose

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choose

from than any decade.

This

essay will discuss that most certainly some countries are at

stage

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a stage

the stage

of

abundance

,

however some

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however, some

countries are still struggling with basic minimum. Developing country people might vary from

this

statement as they evidently have long to way to reach at the pinnacle of choices. These places still have

scarcity

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a scarcity

of certain items which are only available in the developed countries. For

instances

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instance

, India still

have

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has

only 2 stream of

education commerce

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education, commerce

and science, whereas in

Usa

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

use

USA

us

we would find more than 20 subjects to opt from. In order to get

to

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in

abundance

in everything many countries are still lacking the sources to achieve

this

goal. People advocating the increase of options

belongs

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belong

to mostly a developed nation, in these types of

countries technological

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countries, technological

advancements and globalization are the prominent pillars of

inventions

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the inventions

. Most developed countries are leveraging these inventions to their

un

belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive

own

privilege counterparts.

For example

, immigration has become

simple process

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a simple process

, most places are welcoming people from across the globe for them to experience

abundance

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the abundance

an abundance

of preferences.

Therefore it

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Therefore, it

is a global phenomenon to support all in order to achieve choices for many people. In conclusion, these days most people think that we have more preferences,

however

, as I discussed in the passage handful countries population would have that privilege than other global entities.

Thus

, I believe that we have still

long way

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a long way

to go to achieve

this

stage of

abundance

.