Many animals species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes an possible solutions to this problem.
Excessive human intervention in nature's activity has led to extinction of certain animals.
This
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reasons including
Hunting and Forest Accept comma addition
reasons, including
fire
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will Use synonyms
also
suggest Linking Words
solution
as serious criminal charges on hunting and alternative methods for saving them from Suggestion
a solution
solutions
fire
.
Some of the animal has gone extinct because of public Use synonyms
mis-management
. The greatest example of management that is careless or inefficient
mismanagement
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fire
which in just 2 days Use synonyms
time eradicated
many species which took shelter that forest. These Accept comma addition
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fire
are often from a small Suggestion
fires
cigratte
or a match stick which is used by humans. finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarette
This
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many
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such
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calfornia
a state in the western United States on the Pacific; the 3rd largest state; known for earthquakes
California
fire
, Use synonyms
fire
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africa
. the second largest continent; located to the south of Europe and bordered to the west by the South Atlantic and to the east by the Indian Ocean
Africa
Secondly
, hunting has been always a prominent reason for species going extinct. Hunting only happens Linking Words
for
those animals who are rare and are having good prices in the market for their skin or teeth or medicinal. A research has been done of nearly extinction of fish, we are hugely hunting fishes for feeding or medicinal purpose and they are not growing at the same rate as we are hunting them. Suggestion
to
Thus
, Hunting and forest fires have majorly responsible for mass eradication of animals because of humans.
Increasing extinction Linking Words
in
animals due to human activities is a reason for Suggestion
of
worrysome
. Though it is not too late and we can work upon the solutions and save our animal kingdom. If the government can have criminal charges levy on the person hunting the animals, it would retain people from doing it. Certain countries like India, not reassuring; tending to cause anxiety
worrisome
wearisome
Bangaldesh
they have banned hunting and made punishment very severe. a Muslim republic in southern Asia bordered by India to the north and west and east and the Bay of Bengal to the south; formerly part of India and then part of Pakistan; it achieved independence in 1971
Bangladesh
Secondly
, we should have a proper disaster management Linking Words
team
in place for Use synonyms
such
big Linking Words
fire
, we should have an animal Use synonyms
evaucation
the act of removing the contents of something
evacuation
team
in place for Use synonyms
this
. Linking Words
In
these recent Suggestion
During
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fire
, it was evident that we were more curious to save humans than any other species. Suggestion
fires
Therefore
, making the hunting a global offence and having a reliable Linking Words
team
to support in case of the Use synonyms
fire
can save us from mass eradication.
In conclusion, evidently humans are the main reason of death of many animals. Use synonyms
This
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essay
discussed the causes largely summarised as hunting and forest blaze. Use synonyms
This
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also
suggested Linking Words
solution
to make hunting illegal and banning the citizen from doing it, and to have a back up Suggestion
solutions
a solution
team
for Use synonyms
evacuation
of animals stuck in Suggestion
the evacuation
such
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fire
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite