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Nowadays in some countries children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Do you agree or disagree?

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At present, very fewer duties are given to youngsters in some countries as compared to the past. In my opinion, I completely agree that these
days
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day's
competition
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competitions
 among children and advancements in
technology
 have prevailed
such
 an extent that these have made them irresponsible.
To begin
 with, while the children are busy competing with others in terms of education, they are unaware of being irresponsible with other important things in life.
In other words
, due to the cut-throat
competition
, adolescents indulge themselves in studies not only to learn
subjects but
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subjects, but
also
 to compete with others to get good marks. So, guardians think they are already under the burden of studies and if more tasks are given to them, it will be an injustice to them. In the past,
although
 students use to do studies there was not much
competition
, which leads children to do many things apart from studies.
Thus
, the ever-increasing
competition
 has taken the toll of making them irresponsible. Another reason for being given fewer responsibilities to juveniles is due to the advancements in the
technology
 sector. At present, since
technology
 has boomed to
such
 an extent, electronic gadgets have become
the cheapest
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cheaper
. Owing to
this
, every child from an early age gets mobile phones.
Therefore
,
instead
 of taking advantage they spend hours poring over mobile phones and develop an addiction to games.
This
 recklessness has made them irresponsible towards any important task given to them. To exemplify, in the past, most household chores
such
 as purchasing milk and groceries were done by youngsters of a home, but in recent times parents prefer to do things on their own.
Hence
,
this
 carelessness and
technology
 have made them irresponsible. To conclude, even though children being competitive learning an important skill of life, as well as advancements in
technology
, have revolutionized the world;
however
, these have made children reckless and
consequently
 lead them to be given less responsibilities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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