More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
More men and women today opt to live alone than they did in the past. In my opinion,
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is a negative development because it can jeopardize their own lives and, Linking Words
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, can cause human to disappear.
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of all, living alone can put one's life at risk due to missing Linking Words
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aids when they are in danger. Accidents or sicknesses can happen at any time, and people's lives are often saved by immediate actions from the closest person, Linking Words
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as the one who lives together with them. Linking Words
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is especially critical for those who are suffering from heart and obesity related diseases, because if the help comes a minute later, it is enough to put their life at 50% chance to survive. Linking Words
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, there are many cases in Japan that people found dead in their apartment because nobody could provide an immediate support when they had heart attacks.
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, people's preference to live by themselves can cause human population to continuously declined or even disappeared. Naturally, humans reproduce by living together with the opposite gender. Whenever men and women prefer to live alone, they will not have kids. If Linking Words
this
continues, the number of people in an area will continuously decrease until a point when the society will no longer have the Linking Words
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generation and, Linking Words
as a result
, the population will disappear after the Linking Words
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generations die. Linking Words
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, In Japan, the country's population has decreased by 15% from the Linking Words
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two decades because many people prefer to live alone.
In conclusion, the preference of today's generation to live by themselves is considered to be negative. Linking Words
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