More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
More men and women today opt to live alone than they did in the past. In my opinion,
this
Linking Words
is a negative development because it can jeopardize their own lives and,
furthermore
Linking Words
, can cause human to disappear.
First
Linking Words
of all, living alone can put one's life at risk due to missing
first
Linking Words
aids when they are in danger. Accidents or sicknesses can happen at any time, and people's lives are often saved by immediate actions from the closest person,
such
Linking Words
as the one who lives together with them.
This
Linking Words
is especially critical for those who are suffering from heart and obesity related diseases, because if the help comes a minute later, it is enough to put their life at 50% chance to survive.
For example
Linking Words
, there are many cases in Japan that people found dead in their apartment because nobody could provide an immediate support when they had heart attacks.
Moreover
Linking Words
, people's preference to live by themselves can cause human population to continuously declined or even disappeared. Naturally, humans reproduce by living together with the opposite gender. Whenever men and women prefer to live alone, they will not have kids. If
this
Linking Words
continues, the number of people in an area will continuously decrease until a point when the society will no longer have the
next
Linking Words
generation and,
as a result
Linking Words
, the population will disappear after the
last
Linking Words
generations die.
For example
Linking Words
, In Japan, the country's population has decreased by 15% from the
last
Linking Words
two decades because many people prefer to live alone. In conclusion, the preference of today's generation to live by themselves is considered to be negative.
This
Linking Words
essay pointed out the two causes which can occur because of
this
Linking Words
, while the high-risk to people's lives is being the
first
Linking Words
and human's extinction is the
second
Linking Words
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: