People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this.

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In the
last
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few decades, the consumption of ready-made-meals have increased dramatically. For people with long working hours
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is a fast and easy way to feed themselves. Precooked
food
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might be convenient and
time
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-saving but it is
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unhealthy and can lead to several illnesses.
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essay will discuss why people prefer processed meals over fresh produce and what effects
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might have on them. Nowadays, most people are forced to spend longer hours in the office, leaving little
time
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for anything else, including the preparation of a healthy dinner. For most people it is more convenient to purchase ready-made meals
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of spending more
time
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on preparing it themselves. A very good example would be, where both parents need to work long hours and
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still need to prepare a dinner, do homework with the kids and have family
time
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, leaving no
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for oneself. Clearly, processed meals are more convenient and
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efficient but
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efficient, but
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have
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
downside. Processed
food
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contains
alot
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a lot
of chemical
presevatives
tending or having the power to preserve
preservatives
, salt and sugar to keep it fresh and
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for longer periods.
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is very unhealthy
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in
the long run and can cause diseases
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as obesity,
cholestrol
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
, diabetes and even heart diseases. Recent studies in South Africa showed that almost 65% of people who only eat processed
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tends to get one of these illnesses at
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an
age as young as 8 years old. In conclusion, people with a busy lifestyle prefer the convenience of processed
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, even though being aware of the
unhealty
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
side effects
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as obesity and diabetes caused by all these meals.

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