The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the data about three

products

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which are exported from

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Someland

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during 2005,

2015

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and 2015

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and future predictions for 2025 in

Billion

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USD

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Overall

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, International tourism and Dairy

products

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were the highest overseas sold items for both years and

also

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in future.

Whereas

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, meat

products

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were exported

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minimum

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and expected the same in future. In 2005, Meat

products

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sold were 4

billion

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USD

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and by 2015

this

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has moderately dropped to about 3.5

billion

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USD

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, in 2025 it is estimated to reach around 3

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USD

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On the other hand

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, the diary

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, exported in 2005 were almost 5.7

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USD

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, which has risen rapidly to nearly 8

billion

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USD

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, but in 2025 it is expected to decrease sharply

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to around

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6.3

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USD

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the

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apply

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International tourism,

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apply

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experiences an upward trend with around 6.2

billion

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USD

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in 2005,

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and almost

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billion

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USD

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in 2015.

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, in 2025 it is estimated that

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apply

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International tourism marketing might reach about 7.8

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USD

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, usd with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Children today spend too much time playing on screens and not enough time doing physical activity. We need to get rid of our children’s devices to avoid severe strains on our health system in the future. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?