IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #someland #exports #future #projections #summarise #features #comparisons
The bar chart illustrates the data about three
products
 which are exported from
Someland’s
Change noun form
Someland
show examples
 during 2005,
2015
Correct word choice
and 2015
show examples
 and future predictions for 2025 in
Billion
USD
.
Overall
, International tourism and Dairy
products
 were the highest overseas sold items for both years and
also
 in future.
Whereas
, meat
products
 were exported
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
show examples
 and expected the same in future. In 2005, Meat
products
 sold were 4
billion
USD
 and by 2015
this
 has moderately dropped to about 3.5
billion
USD
.
Whereas
, in 2025 it is estimated to reach around 3
billion
USD
.
On the other hand
, the diary
products
, exported in 2005 were almost 5.7
billion
USD
, which has risen rapidly to nearly 8
billion
USD
, but in 2025 it is expected to decrease sharply
around
Change preposition
to around
show examples
 6.3
billion
USD
.
Finally
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
International tourism,
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
experiences an upward trend with around 6.2
billion
USD
 in 2005,
almost
Correct word choice
and almost
show examples
 7
billion
USD
 in 2015.
However
, in 2025 it is estimated that
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
International tourism marketing might reach about 7.8
billion
USD
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, usd with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!