you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit .write a letter to the manager. what the problem is how feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take
Dear sir,
I am writing to you, to get your attention towards the dressing room in our sports centre. I am sorry to say that I am really dissatisfied with them. I hope you understand
this
matter and take the necessary steps.
I am shaila aaiman
one of the loyal members of Correct your spelling
Gaiman
this
sports centre. As it's my daily routine to come here for playing tennis, I change my clothes every day but recently I have noticed that the rooms
are really untidy and are not being cleaned properly.
Because of such
uncleaned rooms
, I am not motivated to visit your centre. Also
,
It is affecting my health, due to over dust present in the rooms
which is
not good for anybody coming to Change the verb form
are
this
place. Instead
of being regular, people avoid coming here.
I would like to suggest to hire
a separate cleaner Change the verb form
hiring
to
Change preposition
for
changing
Change the verb form
change
rooms
. Who will not only clean the rooms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
take care of the hygiene concerns.
I hope you give Change the punctuation
?
this
matter an
urgent attention and do the needful.
Thanking you in advance.
your's sincerely,
Remove the article
apply
shaila
Change the capitalization
Shaila
aaiman
Correct your spelling
Gaiman
Naiman
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