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some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie.Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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Nowadays, a new trend
has been gaining
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has gained
 significant traction in the
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 industry and
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 the ‘INR 1 Billion Club’. Many leading film actors are scouting for better scripts and better production houses in an attempt to join
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 club. While there is no clear roadmap to enter
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 club, the
movie
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 industry is clearly divided into two ways: high-budget movies with
weak
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a weak script
script
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 and low-budget movies with strong
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 Production houses are spending millions of rupees in exotic locations, designer clothes and
movie
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 design and graphics to enhance
audience experience
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the audience experience
.
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 production houses believe by a
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 with a weak
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 can be made a blockbuster by simply amplifying the other factors.
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, the commercially successful movies
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 as ‘Fast & Furious’ and ‘Mission Impossible’ have been banking on the back of superior action sequences, advance
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-graphics, well-renowned cast, punchy dialogues and exotic locations. While the crux of
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 movies which in fact is the
script
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 is monotonous and predictable.
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, on the other side of the scale we have low-budget movies where the secret sauce is a mind-engaging
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 and new talent with exceptional acting skills. Movies
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 as ‘Queen’ won the hearts of millions of audiences because of its heart-gripping narration and superior performances.
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, the key underlying question is, what are the key factors that contribute
for
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to
 a
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’s success? In my opinion, movies with a strong content and a cast that does justice to the roles can easily outweigh
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 that high-budget movies. Of course, audiences these days look forward for a good experience and enjoy the grandeur that high-budget movies
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pussies
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, watching a
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that is
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 able to move the audiences with a simple clean
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 is far more superior, which why they the saying ‘Content is king’ cannot be ignored
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