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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and the society?

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In
this
 highly competitive world, people have been spending a significant amount of
time
 at their workplaces. It is true that most of the working people do not have social and family lives due to their hectic life. In
this
 essay, I would like to discuss various aspects of the topic and try to reach a conclusion according to my perspective. To commence with, in
this
 globalised world, most of the companies and their workers have to face an international competition in the market which makes
their
objective case of they
them
work
 harder and tougher. To make it clear, it is evident that most of the international firms are technologically and ideally advanced so it has become necessary to
work
 overtime with dedications to compete with those companies.
Furthermore
, nowadays, daily expenses of a family
has been
Suggestion
have been
 rising day-by-day,
such
 as the money spent on groceries, petroleum and so on. In
this
 context, it is hard for a man to run a family with a single job or regular working hours so they are forced to
work
 more. More importantly, unemployment has resulted in minimising wages of most of the
works
Suggestion
work
. To exemplify, in India, a nurse's monthly salary is 100 dollar, it is impossible for them to live with
this
 small amount and that’s why the nurse needs to
work
 extra hours and even
in
Suggestion
on
 days off to earn a bit more.
On the other hand
, the platform of family life is interaction, socialisation and communication. When family members do not have enough
time
 to interact each other, there will form a communication gap among them and that ultimately affect
family relation
Suggestion
the family relation
.
Moreover
, as most of the people in a society
over
Suggestion
after
work
 and when they do not have sufficient
time
 for interaction and exchange of ideas. It is evident that, unless the co-operation of society, there will not be an effective development in society. To conclude, in my opinion, increased workforce and
overtime
Suggestion
over time
 have badly affected the social and family life of people. Even there are laws which say about minimum working hours of employees, many workers are forced to
work
over
work done in addition to regular working hours
overtime
time
.
Hence
, the government and authorities should take initiatives to come with a solution to
this
 problem.

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