Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Throughout the world, people are exploring various ways to improve the public
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some think that having more sports facilities is an excellent way to improve public Linking Words
health
, while others feel that it is not sufficient and other options are required. In Use synonyms
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essay, we will discuss both the approaches and see why we definitely need other measures to improve the Linking Words
health
of the community.
Having more community centres would make is easily accessible to more residence. The main reasons people do not go these facilities are due the distance and bad weather. Use synonyms
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, winter weather makes it worse. Linking Words
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, a recent survey among the working adults indicates more than 75% of them said they would sign up for sport Linking Words
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, if it is accessible from home or from their workplace. Use synonyms
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, increasing facilities would draw in more people and Linking Words
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motivate others to join to the facilities.
On the other side, Some say just increasing facilities would not suffice and other measures like promoting healthy eating and regular exercising needs to be promoted. In general, improving public Linking Words
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with including other approaches as people are diverse. Use synonyms
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, encouraging people to follow a healthier lifestyle with healthy eating and following a consistent exercise or sport routine would lead to a better result. Linking Words
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, regular activity combined with low fat, low calorie diet would make people physically and mentally fit and happy. Taking a combined Linking Words
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In conclusion, Just increasing the sport Use synonyms
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. Combining that with regular exercise and healthier diet would lead to better physical and mental Use synonyms
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amount the general public.Use synonyms
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