Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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have long been known as a great place for

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to learn more about

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history

as well as

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enjoy the mysterious beauty of artefacts.

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, there exist several

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that require an amount of

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called entrance

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. In my opinion,

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action is a two-sided affair having both negative and positive aspects which will be discussed as follows. In the first place, one benefit of the admission

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charged by

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is that

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amount of

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collected from visitors would act as an additional aid for the

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’ maintenance. Obviously, in order to run a museum displaying and exhibiting precious and valuable items back in the day, many sources of capital are required to be spent on keeping

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alive.

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,

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and proficient workers would be needed when it comes to abolishing or cleansing the

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’ belongings because these artefacts can be easily damaged and broken by carelessness.

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,

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managers will have to pay them salaries for their work and it could be expensive as

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type of job is done usually on a daily basis.

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is when entrance

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might significantly alleviate the burden of sustaining the

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’ operation and mitigate the number of

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that

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have to bear.

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, an obligatory entrance fee might be a discouraging factor making

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less interested in paying a visit to a museum. It is commonly thought that

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are like history public classes where

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can learn more about

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prehistoric life and have a better insight into the past.

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, it is more reasonable to obtain

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knowledge free of charge, like park benches or public libraries. If

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have to pay

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to do so, they might feel reluctant to choose

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as a way of learning and entertaining.

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, a great number of

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believe that the government should be responsible

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ensuring the sustaining

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of

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are paid in full.

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, visitors have no responsibility to pay for any

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. In conclusion, I personally find that the benefits

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charging

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for admission

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outweighed by its drawbacks. If

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need capital resources to cover the

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bills, it would be the government’s responsibility.

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, it is advisable to welcome visitors without charging them any amount of

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.