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Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more?

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During recent years more and more tourists from other countries come to China and visit historical places. They regard heritage sites and museums as their ideal destinations.
Meanwhile local
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Meanwhile, local
 people begin to give up their own country’s historical sites as their holiday choice. The reason why natives and foreigners have opposite attitudes when they choose their
vocation
leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure
vacation
 destinations is partly because of the propaganda broadcasted and published by tourist departments through international platforms. As tourism has become one of the main forces that propel
economy
Suggestion
the economy
. Local governments begin to seek some stunts to attract more visitors.
As a result
,
culture
 and historical elements become their priorities given China is famous for its history.
Besides
, the indigenous people have changed their traditional mindsets when they decide where to travel. It’s because the large influx of foreign tourists causes these hot spots so crowded that locals do not want to follow the main trend. To avoid traffic jams and the large population, they prefer to pick up overseas trips
instead
 of domestic trips. It does not mean people from other countries have more interests in visiting historical sites than those people who live in China. What the government needs to do, is giving more chances to locals who are interested in their own
culture
 and heritages. In order to provide these opportunities, local infrastructures need to be improved, so tourists can visit
more conveniently
Suggestion
more convenient
 and enjoyably.
In addition
, the target population of historical
tourists
Suggestion
tourist
 spots has to be changed from foreigners to locals. Tourism is an exchange of people-to-people as well as
culture
. It helps a lot in cross-border communication and understanding, but we
also
 need to deepen the understanding of our own
culture
 in our own society

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