Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make. Has this become a positive or negative development?
Technology
has made a huge revolution in today's society and people's lives over the past few decades. Use synonyms
Technology
has touched our lives in each and every aspect including the relationships we make. The early days, Use synonyms
pepole
got used to visit each other physically. But, with the advancements of (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
technology
people cannot feel Use synonyms
big distance even
if they are at the two corners of the world. Suggestion
the big distance, even
the big distance even
Technology
has made the long distances very close thanks to the developments in telecommunication. The Use synonyms
technology
is now even more advance to give people the feel of touch through mobile phones.
Nowadays, it is really difficult to find someone without a mobile phone. Earlier, people had some time for small Use synonyms
chats even
with Accept comma addition
chats, even
starngers
when they are travelling by bus or train. But, nowadays people are more busy with their own devices so that they have forgotten even to smile with each others. When it comes to anyone who does not belong in the environment in which they are found
strangers
family reunion
, in Suggestion
family reunions
a family reunion
early days
people had enough time to be with each other. But, nowadays everyone is busy with the Suggestion
the early days
technology
and we cannot see any strong bond within the family. As another example, in our childhood we got used to visit our relations at least once a year. But, now those things have been limited to a one minute phone call or small chat.
If we consider love affairs, letters were the main method of communication. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they had to wait for days or even weeks to get a reply Linking Words
for
the letter. We have seen how our Suggestion
to
grand parent
a parent of your father or mother
grandparent
remind
those lovely memories. Sometimes, they even Suggestion
reminds
remeber
what was written in those letters. recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection
remember
On the other hand
, nowadays young couples are using social media Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
viber
, a slender and greatly elongated substance capable of being spun into yarn
fibre
whatapp
, Suggestion
what app
facebook
etc. Suggestion
Facebook
to
express their feelings. Not like in Suggestion
To
early days
, these things are very temporary and we have seen most of their affairs are Suggestion
the early days
breaked
up in less than one year.
In conclusion, I think physically and forcibly separated into pieces or cracked or split
broken
broke
technology
has made people and their relationships apart Use synonyms
ecah
other while making the people's day to day life much easier.(used of count nouns) every one considered individually
each
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